High School or College Essays
As a writing professional, I occasionally get asked to help someone’s child nail an important essay. Whether it is for College or High School, the type of essay that succeeds is the same.
Nailing the Essay
One of the most important things to remember when writing an essay in the academic world is that academic writing does not necessarily conform to what is considered good writing elsewhere. In fact, the kind of writing that succeeds well in academia is generally not the kind of writing you want anywhere else. Newspapers need a grabbing headline followed by the necessary who, what, when, with a lot less emphasis on how and why. Fiction writing is very much about pacing and keeping reader interest. Magazine writing requires “writing to size” which means either cramming information into too short of article, or bloating too little information into a bigger article. None of these will win you any A+ marks in school.
The Five Paragraph Essay
As a writer, the temptation to be creative is a powerful one. However, this impulse should be resisted unless you are well into graduate school. Most high-school teacher and many college professors are experts in their subject area, not in writing. They understand and expect a specific style of essay. When you get creative, they may not see that you have written everything necessary for a high mark because the format is distracting.
Keep in mind that you are writing to prove subject mastery, not to prove writing ability. You wouldn’t answer the questions on a multiple choice test by singing limericks. Yes, it is very creative and very original, but it isn’t how you answer test questions. The same concept applies to writing an essay. Even if the teacher expresses an interest in originality or creativity, do so within this structure or risk a lower grade.
The standard academic essay is the Five Paragraph Essay. In a nutshell, this format is an introductory paragraph, followed by three proving paragraphs, and finished with a conclusion paragraph.
The Introduction Paragraph
The most common flaw from students writing an essay can be traced to an incorrect introduction paragraph. Problems here lead to issues throughout the essay, so it is important to hit all the points before moving on.
The first thing to write (though it does not come first in the final product) is your “thesis statement.” This is a fancy way of saying what your essay will be about. The key to a thesis statement is that it must be a supportable opinion. The number one mistake is not stating an opinion. An opinion is not a fact. To verify that you have chosen an opinion, ask yourself, what is the opposite opinion? If there isn’t a reasonable one, then you have not stated an opinion.
For example, in Shakespeare’s Macbeth, teachers and professors love dissecting the role of Lady Macbeth. Stating that Lady Macbeth is an influential character, or central character is not an opinion. Any statement to the contrary is false. She obviously is both. Stating that she is more responsible than Macbeth for the tragedy that befalls them both is an opinion. One could just as easily argue that she is doing nothing more than supporting her husband’s ambitions, and that Macbeth is responsible for his own actions. One could even argue that the witches are more to blame.
Once you have your opinion, turn it into a thesis statement. In our example above, a good thesis statement is something like, “Lady Macbeth’s manipulation of her husband’s emotions is the true cause of both their tragedy.”
The next thing you will need is your “essay map.” This is a fancy way of saying what proof you have to support your thesis statement. Since, your essay will have five paragraphs, you need three “locations” on your essay map. All three of these points must be directly supportive of the thesis statement. If you want to write about something that is not going to support the thesis statement, then you need to change your thesis statement. In other words, if you want to go down Main Street, then pick a location that requires travel in the direction of Main Street. You cannot be a bad taxi driver and take a longer route just because you like Main Street.
In our example above, your essay map might include a discussion of what happens before the king arrives, what happens after the king name’s his heir, and what happens after the king’s murder.
Now that you have your thesis statement and essay map, you are ready to write your introductory paragraph. Ready?
First, write a sentence that would clue someone who did not know the assignment in. For maximum grade points this sentence should also praise the subject matter.
- Shakespeare’s Macbeth is a masterpiece of tragedy that fully explores the both the depths of human depravity in the name of ambition and the related consequences.
- Harry Potter is a fascinating look at the life of a young boy who suddenly finds that he is capable of so much more than he ever imagined.
Notice how these sentences both state the subject matter (This essay is about Macbeth or Harry Potter) and praise the subject matter (masterpiece, fascinating).
Second, write a sentence that moves toward your point and acknowledges that there were other equally wonderful topics.
- Although Macbeth provides a wide exploration of the human condition, the manipulation of Macbeth by Lady Macbeth is perhaps the most powerful example of human interaction.
Now, insert your thesis statement. No editing required.
Next, insert your essay map. This should be one sentence stating how you will prove your thesis statement by examining your three points. It must be one (and only one) sentence and it must name all three points.
Never ever use the words “this essay will prove” or “this essay will show”. In fact, the words “this essay” should NOT appear anywhere in your paper. If they do, re-write.
- Lady Macbeth’s manipulation of her husband’s emotions is the cause of both their tragedy. When the king arrives, she plants the seed of greatness in her husband’s head, then when the king names his heir, she plants the seed of murder, and following the murder, she plants the seeds of both their doom.
Orange=Essay Map
Done! Move on to paragraph two. At this point, many students want to write about other things they want to say. The answer is NO. If your introduction paragraph has anything other than these five sentences, I guarantee you it is weaker, not stronger. You don’t need anything extra. In fact, if you have something else in your introduction, the reader has a right to expect that you will further address it in your essay. Since you will not deviate from proving your thesis, this is a problem. Do not offer any proof in your introductory paragraph. Like a lawyer at a trial, this is your opening statment. You can say, “The evidence will show that my client is innocent.” You do not say, “The picture on the desk proves that my client has never been to the conservatory and has never even picked up a candlestick.” This is not evidence time, this is coming attractions time.
Introduction Paragraph Summary
- Write thesis statement.
- Write essay map.
- Write one praising introductory sentence.
- Write one “there were many wonderful things but I chose this one” sentence.
- Insert your thesis statement.
- Insert your essay map.
- Move on to paragraph 2.
- If you followed the above, you will only have 5 sentences in your intro paragraph. Don’t get cute.
Bonus A+ Tips
If you really want an A, pick a topic that your professor or teacher has raised and had the class discuss. Obviously, you don’t want something that has been covered ad nauseam, but you do want something that came directly from the professor. If your professor made only a passing reference to Lady Macbeth’s influence, then that means he or she doesn’t believe in its importance.
It is easier to prove something the other person already believes. So, pick something your professor believes. If instead, he or she has discussed the powerful use of imagery (river of blood) or the role of the witches (would he have done any of this if they hadn’t said those things?) then write about that. The time for writing what you want to write is when you are not writing for grades. Until then, write for grades (which means writing what the professor wants to hear).
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How to Not Write Copy That Sells!
Let’s face it, if you look around long enough at information about business writing eventually you are going to come across an article about writing copy that sells! This information will no doubt tread the well worn ground of grabbing your reader’s attention, creating urgency, and most importantly of all, a can’t miss call to action. Don’t get me wrong, these are indeed the critical tenants of well crafted copy, but the implementation often goes horribly wrong, mostly due to an inability to update with the changing times.
A Free Trial?
Most writing instructions will implore you to seriously consider using a “free trial” for your call to action. This was once good advice, but that time has past. You see, not long ago, several good honest hard working businesses offered free trials of their products. The theory was that once someone experienced just how great the product or service was, then they would gladly become paying customers. The problem is that many not so honest businesses quickly joined the fray with trial offers that were sneaky or outright fraudulent. Now, the words, free trial offer, conjure an immediate eye roll in most any reader whose first thought is not the possibility of just how wonderful it might be to test your product for free, but rather, “What’s the catch?”
Think about it another way. When was the last time you took advantage of a free trial offer? I’m willing to bet that either a) you were going to buy the product anyway, and the free trial just meant you saved some money, or b) you never intended to become a paying customer and you just wanted to use the free period. Does either of those scenarios sound like the kind of activity you want to be generating?
When AOL built its entire Internet empire on the free trial offer, business noticed. Free trials became very common. But, someone else noticed too. Customers who signed up for a free trial, but forgot to cancel noticed that most free trial offers come with the requirement to provide a credit card number or other billing information. Most Americans by now are all too savvy to the fact that half the reason companies offer free trials is to get a few payments after the customer forgets to cancel.
This stigma on the free trial means that not only will the reader not take the free trial offer, but they may also regard the entire copy as suspect and chose to simply not believe or further investigate anything it says.
Better Than a Free Trial
Any good writer or marketer knows that simply sending out great informative copy is worthless unless it compels the reader to take steps that ultimately lead to a sale. After all, you aren’t just trying to get people to agree with you that your product or service is great. No one is trying to win a popularity contest. So, how do you implement a solid call to action without a free trial offer?
This is where a freelance writer with real world professional experience can be a great help. One size fits all has never been the way to go, and that is especially true in marketing. While a sweepstakes or raffle may be a good route for one product, it may be a blunder for another. Tailoring the call to action to the specific product or company is paramount to success.
A Buy One Get One Free Sale for eyeglasses will tend to draw more past customers (especially families who can get one pair each for husband and wife) than it will new customers. That is fine if the goal is to increase sales for that period, but not so great if the goal is to expand your client base. To get new clients into an eyeglass business a straight 30% off sale would work better. Even better might be a free eye exam for anyone who brings in an old prescription. But something more original could be even more powerful.
Take the increasing number of people investigating buying eyeglasses online. Glassy Eyes details one man’s success with online eyeglass vendors, but even a cursory reading throws up many cautions and red flags. Read closer and you will see that the number one hang-up for many who want to go this route is getting the prescription from the eye doctor who doesn’t want to give it out. An offer to provide a free eye exam in exchange for the customer brining in a printout of the online glasses they are thinking about buying so that you can match the price. Better yet, if you can use your expertise to point out that the pair they have selected won’t look very good on their round face and even point them to a similar pair (they can even check the dimensions if they want) that they can try on may not only give you a customer today, but a loyal future customer who recommends you to friends. “I was going to buy a pair online, but when they showed me a similar pair they looked awful. I didn’t end up paying that much more, and my glasses actually look good.”
Mission Accomplished.
Hiring a Freelance Writer
As a small business owner or as a manager, you may eventually come across a reason to hire a freelance writer. Most of the time, freelancers are hired by businesses who don’t have the time or expertise to create the documents they are looking for. For example, a busy web entrepreneur knows that in order to rank well with the search engines that he needs fresh keyword heavy content. Yet, running the business, filling orders, and keeping the website code and functions running is a full-time job.
That is where a freelance writer comes in. A professional freelance writer can produce several pages of solid content quickly. The biggest catch for most professionals is that they have never hired a freelance writer before. In many areas there are definitive standards or associations that can help with contacting a solid professional. For example, you can look to the CPA designation to ensure that an accountant meets a certain level of training and experience. With writers, there isn’t the same kind of designation in use. Therefore, many of those looking to hire a professional writer attempt to use other concepts as a way to screen writers, often to their own detriment.
Freelance Writing Degrees
Without a standard writing certification, many employers turn to college degrees as a way to find quality writers. Many job postings or RFPs require a degree in English, or other “writing” type degree. The flaw in this strategy is readily apparent. While it is true that an English major may require more writing than other majors, it is not a writing degree. A person who completes an Bachelors of Arts in English can be reasonably assumed to have taken several classes in which reading is the primary focus. Most writing comes in the form of writing about what you have read. Again, this is not a bad thing, but does it help determine if some is a good choice to write for your business?
Academic writing is both very traditional and structured in nature. Does your brochure need a 5-paragraph essay structure? Should each of your paragraphs on the website begin with a topic sentence? Will Google rank your page higher if the conclusion refers back to all main points raised in the body of the essay?
Consider instead whether a degree in what is being written ABOUT would be more useful. In articles about engineering or marketing, engineering or marketing degrees may imply a certain depth of knowledge. That knowledge may be more useful than classical training in writing.
Freelance Writers and Buzzwords
When I read through various ads or postings requesting writers, I can see that the person who posted the ad did a little bit of research first. Unfortunately, this research can take the form of simply copying terms or phrases that have been seen often enough to look important.
One of the most common terms is “familiarity with AP Style.” This does indeed sound impressive, and it is likely to be seen on ads from important companies like the New York Times or Wall Street Journal. Of course, there is a reason it is seen there. AP Style, is literally, the style used by the Associated Press or AP. Most people know AP from their local newspaper. The AP service writes news articles and allows others who subscribe to the service to either reprint them, or use them as the basis for their own articles. Not surprisingly, then AP Style is very tailored to news.
Curious about what AP Style is? There is actually a book. The Associated Press Stylebook, details the AP Style and contains the rules for how to use various terms and phrases. For example, in stories about wildfires, there will often be a reference to a firefighting technique known as a backfire. This raises some issues. Is it back fire, backfire, or back-fire? In that same sentence are firefighting and wildfire, also in the AP Style guide. What about words a little closer to home?
According to AP Style it should be Internet and Web site. Do you need your articles to use a capital W and a space between ‘web’ and ’site’? Then, maybe you don’t need AP Sytle.
Samples, Samples, Samples
In real estate, they say the three most important things are location, location, and location. When hiring or contracting with a freelance writer the most important things are samples, samples, and samples. Nothing will give more insight into a person’s ability to write than seeing examples of what they have written. Don’t worry if the writing isn’t exactly what you are needing. If an author can clearly explain technical medical jargon, it is a good bet that they can also explain technical financial jargon and so on.
If the position requires the ability to turn over material quickly, a “live” example of such writing can also prove useful. For example, if a writer has links to several websites that have writing samples clearly produced in rapid fashion, then that is extra assurance that he/she will be able to turn around the projects quickly as well.
Questions About Professional Writing
If you have any questions about professional writing, whether hiring or being one, please don’t hesitate to ask.
How To Get What You Want from a Freelance Writer
One of the greatest frustrations for both freelance writers, and the business owners or managers who hire them is a final product that is not what was wanted. A good freelance writer wants to deliver a good end result to their client and does their best to do so. However, there can be a breakdown in communication over what the deliverable is supposed to look like. Often this can be remedied with just a few simple steps.
Freelance Writing Perfection
In order to achieve perfection, one has to know what perfection is. In gymnastics, a perfect 10 from all of the judges represents perfection. It is not a secret how to achieve such a score. There are published rules regarding what kinds of things the judges must see and what kinds of things they must not see in order to get a 10 score. These rules are specific. They do not say “a flawless routine that is inspiring.” That is what they want, but that is not how to communicate. After all, what is inspiring to one person may be showing-off to another person. However, many clients will give no instruction beyond “something simple, yet inspiring.”
In order to get what they want from a freelancer, clients need to break it out further. In our gymnastics example, it is specified that stepping outside the white mat border will mean a points deduction. Now, the gymnast knows specifically what they cannot do. A freelancer needs the same kind of guidance. The above client has asked for simple, but there are many ways to interpret that. Does he mean black and white? Does he mean short? Does he mean no big words?
Freelance Writing and the Haircut
When a person gets their haircut, they have to tell the stylist what they want. This usually takes place in the form of a conversation. The stylist asks questions to clarify what the client wants. When the client says “short,” the stylist can ask “how much shorter, above the ears?” To which the client can answer, “No, just to the tops of the shoulders.” This illustrates exactly how you should communicate with your freelancer.
When the client says, “simple,” the freelancer should inquire, “No color, or no graphics?” The client can then fill in the details as to what they mean by simple.
Professional Freelance Writers Write First
A professional freelance writer will always try to put your request in writing. At ArcticLlama, LLC we strive to put together a simple looking write up of what the client wants. Of course, if the project is very short, or needed very quickly, this step may need to be skipped. But, if the client has sufficient time, this write up saves frustration for everyone involved. As a client it is important for you to review this document of understanding carefully and make sure that it not only does not say the wrong things, but that it also says all of the right things. So, if your DOC (Document of Understanding) says “A three-page article outlining the current economic environment for rental properties,” and you want a three-page article outlining how the current economic environment affects the people who manage rental properties, now is the time to speak up. The freelancer will now write exactly what you want.
Freelance Writing and Re-writes
Remember, rewrites are not the time to change what is being written. It is a time to add on to what was written, or to take out what was written. It is also the time to add examples, change the “sound” of a line or two, and maybe even to add graphics. Changing the theme, the length, or the audience of the product amounts to starting the project over.
Communicate
Remember, the point of hiring a freelance writer is to get someone who is an expert at communicating. Use this expertise in the beginning and you won’t go wrong.
If you have any questions or would like to see a sample DOC, please email us or call us.
Search Engine Optimization and Advertising - Why SEO is Important
Why SEO is Critical to Your Ad Campaign
Search Engine Optimization is a critical linchpin in the success or failure of your advertising campaign. To understand why SEO is so important, let’s take a quick look at the advertising campaigns of two jewelers.
You’ve probably heard of both Kay Jewelers and Jared’s. You also probably know the slogan for each. That is because their multi-million dollar advertising campaigns are working. Between television commercials and radio commercials, both companies have spent lots of money to build brand awareness. That is why every Kay Jewelers commercial, whether T.V. or radio, includes the short melody along with the words, “Every kiss begins with K.” Similarly, Jared has every commercial contain the words “He went to Jared.” Why?
Brand Awareness
Brand awareness is often difficult to explain to clients, but in this case, it should be fairly obvious. Let’s say there is a man. He is a normal everyday man who works at a regular job, has a regular girlfriend, and so on. Let’s call him Sam. Sam doesn’t buy much jewelry. But, today is different because he wants to propose to his girlfriend. Whether Sam buys jewelery or not, and whether or not he pays attention when jewelry commercials come on doesn’t matter. Because he has heard, “Every kiss begins with K,” and “He went to Jared,” so many times, when he tries to think of jewelry stores, those two pop into his head. Mission accomplished, advertising worked, let’s party, right?
Ready to Buy, Now What?
Actually, the next step is the most critical. Now, that Sam is ready to buy he needs to go to the actual building. Unless Sam lives near one and already knows where it is, how will he find either Kay or Jared? The answer is, the phone book or the Internet. Assuming both jewelers target markets are educated, upper-middle class or higher (i.e. people with money) which method is he more likely to use to find the jewelry store? Hint: If you said phone book, it might be time to take some continuing education courses.
So, Sam jumps onto his computer and…what? First, he probably guesses. If he types in www.jareds.com, then yippee! But what if he assumes the “s” is just part of the grammar and not part of the name? If he types in www.jared.com, he ends up at some unrelated advertising page that may send him to a competitor. Think this isn’t an issue? Well, www.kays.com does NOT go to the jeweler like jareds.com does. Instead, in that case the “s” is part of the grammar so, the real web site is www.kay.com.
Now, you are thinking that it is no big deal. Surely, our hero, Sam, will just type in the other web site, right? Well, maybe yes, and maybe no. Sam might decide that it will be more efficient to use a search engine so he can just find the right site and stop messing around. After all, he’s at work and the last thing he wants is to accidentally hit some porno site by getting the wrong site. He knows that it could be kay.com, kayjewlery.com, kayjewlers.com, kaysjewelry.com and so on.
If Sam searches for Kay Jewelers, then no problem. But, if Sam decides instead, “Hey, I’m here, I might as well just type in ‘jewelers’ or ‘engagement rings’ just to see,” there could be a problem. If you search Google for engagement rings, Kay doesn’t show up until page 4, well after Sam has been reminded of several competitors, if he perseveres until page four at all. Not only that, but along the way several benevolent sounding web sites offer what sounds like unbiased information. If he decides to check out those, he may decide to buy over the Internet, or direct from China, or whatever.
Small Business and SEO
Keep in mind, these are two big jewelry store chains that spend millions on advertising. How do you think this would play out for a smaller local business without a million dollar ad budget? Cracking the first page for a search on engagement rings would be great, but at a minimum a local business needs to be on the first page for results of engagement ring +cityname. For example, if you are a locally owned store in Denver, your business should really be on the first page when someone searches ‘engagement rings Denver’. Are you? If not, that’s where ArcticLlama and SEO comes in.
Too many other companies throw around the phrase Search Engine Optimization and SEO without really understanding the full process of moving up in the search engine rankings. Yes, keyword loaded articles are a start, but that is the easy part. The real skill comes from determining which keywords or key phrases can be best targeted for you. You could spend years writing key word filled articles and never end up on the first page for searches on popular phrases that have large multi-national companies servicing those niches. Just as important is getting links to those pages. Without links the search engines don’t care how many keywords are there. After all, no one wants to read meaningless articles just stuffed with keywords. The way search engines know articles are relevant is when people think they are important enough to link to.
A full service SEO (Search Engine Optimization) firm like ArcticLlama not only provides the keyword filled articles you need, it also provides the buzz necessary to generate those all important links while targeting the right keywords. Whether you are an advertising or public relations firm working for an important client, or if you are a business owner looking to maximize your Internet presence, we can help. In the mean time, don’t forget that finding your business is just as important as knowing about it.
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Expert Status
Expert Llama
I won’t pretend to know how hard it is or anything, but I have been awarded “expert author status” on EzineArticles.com. I hope to use Ezinearticles as a place to publish some of my writing that hasn’t found a more traditional home. Sometimes you like to write about what you want to write about instead of what other people will pay you to write about. Should be fun.
Might write about ADD Tools Help next.
Ezinearticles Expert Badge
Becoming a Freelancer
Not long ago, becoming a freelance writer was akin to becoming an actor. Talent, ambition, and hard word were essential, but somewhere along the way you would need a lucky break. Jim Carrey languished in Hollywood for years before ending up on the television show, In Living Color, where his talents were finally on display in front of enough people for someone to notice. Likewise, a freelance writer could work hard to develop their craft but never get in front of the right people at the right time without some sort of a break.
The problem, in writing at least, was that people are reluctant to take a chance on an unproven writer. So, most people who needed to hire writers demanded some proof of skill and ability to deliver under the proper conditions like deadlines and changing requirements. This proof took the form of “clips” or writing samples. The famous catch-22 in any career path is that no one will hire you until you have experience and you can’t get experience until someone will hire you. For writers, no one would hire you until you had published clips to prove yourself and you couldn’t get published clips until someone would hire you. So, you worked for free, or submitted query after query until, hopefully, that big break came along. Once your foot was in the door, your skill and professionalism could finally carry you along.
Make Your Own Big Break
Today, with the ubiquitousness of the Internet, it is possible to develop a wide array of clips to rival all but the most prolific authors without needed to rely on “the big break.” By either starting your own web sites, or writing for those that take all comers, you can develop an array of links and electronic clips to reference for any job or query. However, the ease of establishing such an electronic portfolio means that you may be competing against others with similar pitches. The important thing is to distinguish yourself by generating the “right” kind of portfolio.
The most useful clips are those that match the kind of writing that is being asked for. If you are interested in writing about animals, then make sure you are devloping a portfolio of clips that includes articles you have written about animals. Start by writing basic how-to articles for a site like eHow. Then, move into writing more research oriented or topic oriented articles at another site that accepts such articles. This will allow you to build up a collection of stories and articles that you can point to when you apply for jobs. Make sure that you keep your own copies of these articles and be prepared to format them in a more traditional manner if the need arises. Not everyone is willing to accept “links” so you may need to attach your writing to an email, or even print and present it in person or via mail.
While developing this portfolio will give you some clout, there will be many other writers who have a similar collection of writings. It is paramount to make your writings stand out from the masses. The two best ways to accomplish this task are to develop your own web sites, and to expand fully into your niche.
Build Your Own Site
Developing your own web site allows you to write about everything you want to write about without the constraints of writing for others. If you choose to write very long or very short articles, humorous or melancholy, foraml or informal, your own web site gives you a place to publish them all. More importantly, as you develop your web site, the repository of writings availible also begins to position you as an expert. While there may be dozens of writers with samples showing their ability to write about animal shelters, only you would come with a collection of dozens or hundreds of articles about animal shelters including everything from operations, to fundraising, to community perception. This appearance of mastery makes you much more likely to be the person selected to write the newsletter for your local Human Society. After all, not only can you write what they are looking for today, but you have shown that you are almost certainly able to write what they may need in the future. Even better, you have demonstrated that you will be able to generate content without the constant need for prompting or being fed article ideas. Indeed, you wrote about two hundred different topics all by yourself.
Don’t worry about the complexity of developing a web site. While it is true that a full commerce site like Amazon.com takes an army of highly skilled programers, developing a regular content based web site is suprisingly easy these days. A number of software programs are availible for free to help with your site, or you can spring for the same kind of programs the pros use like Adobe Dreamweaver. Either way, making a web page becomes just like writing a Word document, and if you are going to be freelance writer, you better know how to write a Word document. Pay no attention in the beginning to concepts like search engine optimization, or CSS, or your web site’s design. Just start getting the copy on there. As you do, you’ll pick up knowledge that will help you better understand those things when you are ready. Remember, the purpose of your site is to have a place to show off your writing, not to become the next pets.com. Nobody needs to “find” your site, you’ll be telling them to go there.
The only question becomes understanding the internet well enough to get up and running. If you aren’t experienced with computers and the Internet, just head for the big boys. Microsoft recently began offering a free service to small businesses (that’s you!) to get a website online with virtually no technical knowledge. They’ll even register the domain name for you so you can write for juliarobertsanimalshelters.com. Don’t get discouraged regarding the domain name. Yes, animalshelters.com is almost certainly already taken, but keep trying and look for something that expresses you a bit. For example, utopiananimalshelters.com might be availible. Two rules of thumb to keep in mind. First, get a domain name that ends in dot com. It may seem like animalshelters.info is better than wishfulthinkinganimalshelters.com but everyone is very used to just typing dot com. Even if someone is looking at your resume there is a chance they’ll type dot com instead of dot info. They’ll probably realize their mistake, but there is no reason to give them the chance to make one. When you are big and powerful you can ignore this rule. The second rule of thumb it to never ever use register.com to look up your domain names. They keep track of what you look up and if you don’t buy it right away, they’ll “reserve” the name for you. Of course, then they’ll charge you extra to register the reserved name. It’s a big scam masquerading as a service.
Actually, Build More than One Site
While developing a single web site can be immensely valuable, developing more than one web site can be even better. Consider the pet food company looking for a freelance writer. While your animal shelter web site certainly positions you as an expert in that realm, as well as a compotent writer in the topic of animals, it does not show any ability in the ability to write in a more “corporate” sense. A second web site, perhaps dedicated to innovations in animal products would show that not only can you write about animals from the perspective of animal shelters, but also in regards to the products that exist for them. While you never would be able to develop a web site for every single kind of project that might come your way, just having two related, but different web sites shows that you aren’t a one trick pony. While the animal product web site is right up the alley of the pet food company, the combination of the two web sites shows anyone your ability to write on any animal topic. When the fur industry comes looking neither of your sites matches exactly, but you have already shown both an ability to write in different styles. There is no reason to assume that you won’t be able to write from their vantage point.
Once you’ve published articles both on your site and on others, your goal should be to fully expand into your niche. In construction there is a product used for insulating around objects that by necessity go through holes in the walls. It is a foam that you spray into the area around the object you need to insulate and it exapands until it fills the entire space so that there is not one tiny pinhold of unsealed space remaining. To build up a powerful resume full of clips do the same thing with your writing niche. While there thousands of people out there who want to write about animals, only a few are dedicated enough to follow through to a fully completed portfolio. This is because doing so becomes more difficult the further you take it.
Fill the Hole
Finding a web site that takes articles about animals is easy, as is getting one or two published on them. Starting your own web site is more difficult, but still not cumbersome. Going the extra distance to find a small online publication dedicated to hamster environments stimulating enough to improve the hamster’s ability to navigate mazes would take more research. Having something published on their site, as well as on sites about horse racing, dog shows, cat collars, vetrenarians, and so on again establishes you as not only an expert, but also as a valued and prolific writer. Also, sooner or later someone who reads highintellecthamsterworld.com will need a freelancer and the sample you have from their favorite web site will carry more weight than a hundred samples from elsewhere.
To fill your niche completely, don’t start out by doing research. Instead, start by writing for what you already know. After you complete an article or posting for a web site you arleady know about, read that web site for references to sites or topics you don’t know about. Follow those links until you find your new place to post. Write for that web site, and then follow from it to others and so on and so on. Incidentally, this is how search engines find all the pages on the internet. If you follow all of the links, theoretically, you would eventually find all the pages. While you are building up your freelance writing career, do the same thing. Eventually, you will find yourself far off the beaten path and your writing samples will far eclipse the ones of those around you. When they do, your big break won’t be a matter of luck, it will be a matter of being the best out there. Do us a favor, and remember us when you are writing the cover story for Horse and Hound.
How to Work with a Freelance Writer
Ok, let’s start with the basics shall we?
Whether you are a small business owner, or someone working at a Fortune 500 company, working with a professional freelance writer can be a very useful way to generate content for your projects. However, it is important to know how to work with a freelancer.
The Intangibles
First, it is important to understand that although we are professionals with experience in demanding and skilled fields, we do not work for your business. We don’t know the internal politics, the corporate mission, the philosophy of your organization or department, and we especially don’t know the people we are writing for. While we don’t need to know every detail, it is important that we have a feel for these things so that we can deliver a final product that works for you. What works for one company may be terrible for another. So, sit down and get an idea of what you are looking for and where it will be going. I find it has been helpful for many clients to imagine how you would give a similar project to a spouse or significant other. For example, if your spouse were writing up a twenty page summary of a large research project and needed to speak with the engineer that wrote the research, what advice would you give them? Would you say, “Bob is a great guy, and really smart, but sometimes he can seem a little cold especially on the phone.” This same advice would help your freelancer.
In addition, the following checklist should help you determine the kind of information your freelancer will need.
- Will any interaction be necessary with other people besides yourself? If so, how should that be established? Call directly, call you first, or let you setup the dialog?
- Should any outside knowledge or research be brought into the project or should the project be done without any such additions? In other words, do you consider the information you give us complete? If so, we won’t look anything else up.
- Who will be reading the final project? What do they like and not like in such reading? Do they like formal or informal? Long or short? Detailed or just the conclusions? Are they a numbers person, or do they just get confused by lots of numbers? We can write any of those and the success of the project depends on us writing the right one.
- How does the final product need to feel? Should it be light or heavy? Serious? Dire?
- What language style should be used? Formal or informal? Like a reporter writing a story or like a friend writing a letter about something they feel strongly towards? Slang or no slang? Contractions or no contractions? Technically formal writing has no contractions, but it can sound mechanical.
- Should the final project sound like outsiders wrote it or not? Sometimes it is an added authority when something sounds like it came from outside, sometimes it just sounds like outsiders (and sometimes you don’t want other people knowing you went outside.)
Another very important aspect of working with freelancers is knowing what you want and communicating it. Asking for a summary of Shakesphere’s works could be just a list, a list with a short explaination of each title, a few paragraphs on each style (comedy, tragedy, etc.). Should there be an exhaustive list (all works listed) or a representative list (just the highlights). Make sure you put in writing as many details as possible. If you are working with successful freelancers, your project won’t be the only one they are working on. That means they’ll need to be able to start your project and then come back to it later. Reading the project specification will be how they remember all the details of what you need.
Know Who You Are Working With
Some freelancers are full-time freelance writers. Others are part-time freelancers either with another writing job, or another non-writing job. Some freelancers are English majors (still in school or not) looking to just do a few things on the side. There are even people who have no professional writing experience at all dabbling in freelance writing. None of these freelancers is necessarily better or worse, but it can be helpful for you to understand who you are working with so you know what to expect. Someone freelancing on the side might not be able to return calls as quickly. Someone who is still in school might not be able to produce the same volume or quality of work during finals.
Get an idea of how they handle their business. For example, we work with many clients, sometimes on-site, sometimes not. Like most writers we don’t do our best work when frequently interrupted, so when working on a project we turn the ringer off on the phone. It doesn’t make sense for us to pay someone just to answer the phone, so chances are high that your call will go to voicemail. However, our voicemail system pages us for every new message, so we check as soon as we can, and we return your call quickly. Others might only commit to a 24 hour call back. Others might not even commit to that. Make sure your style matches what the freelancer can provide. If you have to speak to a live person right away, we might not be the right choice for you, for example.
Rewrites, Re-work, Scope Creep
A professional freelancer may discuss with you the provisions for adjusting their work once you have a chance to read it. It is common to include a certain number of rewrites. Two rewrites is common except for longer or more technical projects. This allows you to flag things you need changed. When you do, be specific. “Make this longer,” isn’t very helpful. Do you want examples? More details? Fluff?
If you need a freelancer to do the project again because it has changed, that is not a rewrite. The easiest way to tell the difference is whether or not you have to give the freelancer any more information in order to get what you need. For example, if you have to give more sales information, then you are asking for re-work. If you ask to have the sales information you gave at the beginning included, that is a rewrite.
Scope creep is fine when you are paying an hourly rate. After all, the time is yours to use however you would like. It may be wasteful to constantly change the project, but you are paying for the changes, so that it something you have to be O.K. with. When you are paying a project rate, however, scope creep can lead to tension between you and your freelancer. The rate you are quoted is based on the project you start with. Like in the movie The Transporter anything after that is a new deal. We understand when little things come up or a small detail is accidentally left out, but we can’t allow for major changes to the project without new pricing.
Sometimes scope creep can be obvious. If you ask for four pages to be used in a newsletter, and then find out later that your newsletter actually needs to be four pages double-sided which is actually eight pages, you obviously shouldn’t expect four more pages for the same price. Sometimes, though, scope creep can be a harder to spot. If you ask for a complete update of your website content, but then decide it would be better to combine three pages into one, it may seem like the same project, but it isn’t. Refreshing or updating a page is much easier than combining two pages. The latter requires adjusting the flow of each page to match the other page, determining where and how to splice in the data, and may require a complete rewrite. Don’t be surprised if your freelancer wants extra compensation to handle the change. Remember, the deal is the deal. Anything else is a new deal. But also remember, we aren’t looking to rip you off. If a change doesn’t require any more work, we won’t charge you more.
Get It In Writing
You don’t necessarily need a full contract everytime you work with a freelance writer or freelance copy editor, although we recommend it any time you start talking about bigger amounts of money. You do need to get a written understanding between you and the freelancer as to what you expect to be delivered and what your freelancer expects to deliver. If you are expecting five pages make sure you have five pages in writing, whether a formal document, or an email or letter. Also clearly spell out the rate you will be paying, when the payment will be made, and the procedure for going over the rate. Also spell out how and when the project can be terminated by either side.
Hopefully this article gives you a foundation for working with a professional freelance writer or professional freelance copy writer. If you have other questions you would like answered, feel free to email us. Also, I would highly recommend you get our feed so that you keep up to date with all the content coming for the site.
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Welcome to the ArcticLlama Blog
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